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"Breaking Bad" — "Bullet Points": Nothing Left to Chance, All Is Working

By Daniel Carlson | Posted Under TV Reviews | Comments (20)



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“Breaking Bad” has always excelled at living in the tension of the layers between its characters. Sometimes these layers can be thought of vertically, as walls that keep people apart, but I find they’re best imagined horizontally, one on top of the other, running between different characters like the strands of a web. The subtext of every situation, of every scene, is that certain members of a group believe one thing to be true while the other half of the room knows the opposite to be the case, and the conversation or action then becomes a dance in which each party tries to behave as innocently as possible while also second-guessing the moves of everyone else. A great example was when everyone was gathered at the hospital in the aftermath of Hank’s shooting: Walt and Skylar presented one version of the truth to Marie, turning Walt’s drug money into gambling winnings, while the three of them presented a wholly different front to Hank and Walt Jr., while on top of that Walt had to deal with the presence of Gus and the real truth of the situation. And it all happened at the same time in the same room.

This, it should go without saying, requires a staggering amount of emotional and mental gymnastics for the characters and is one hell of a thing to try and write, let alone stretch over four seasons. A screenwriter I used to know talked about “winding the bunny” when he talked about story engines. Setting up the plot is like winding up the key on the back of a toy bunny before watching it walk across the table; the tighter you wind the key, the farther the bunny goes, meaning the more energy and conflict and legitimate character tension you put into a story, the farther it will go under its own power. “Breaking Bad” broke the key and replaced it with rocket fuel. This week’s episode, “Bullet Points,” was masterful in the way it brought close characters who have spent so much time battling each other, only to leave them a hair’s breadth from letting the truth spill out like blood from a wound. Every episode is great in one way or another — Vince Gilligan and company are fiendishly consistent, quality-wise — but even among giants, this was a standout.

One of the things that made the episode so riveting was the smart direction from Colin Bucksey and script attributed to Moira Walley-Beckett. (They’re both series regulars: Bucksey directed the second season’s “Phoenix” and the third’s “I See You,” while Walley-Beckett penned “Breakage,” “Mas,” and co-wrote the amazing bottle episode “Fly.”) Specifically, two major scenes were allowed to play out to fantastic length, with the visuals working to complement the complex emotional storm in both. The first major set piece was Walt and Skylar’s latest ten rounds about how to construct the lie they’re living, which unfolded in a stunning nine-minute scene in the White living room. It’s rare to get an uninterrupted scene of that length in a film, and on TV it’s almost unthinkable, since it takes up about one-fifth of the episode’s running time. (Though since AMC usually has these episodes running four or five minutes over, the percentages fluctuate a [very] little.) It was a wonderful scene that moved through so many complicated emotions reaching back through the series run, checking off major moments and heartaches as milestones that got our leads where they are now. Walt and Skylar are locked in something that’s twisted and constricting and not at all a marriage; the look of cautious openness in her eyes when Walt said he was sorry that turned to stone when he revealed he was acting — that was a moment of utter sadness and loss. It was riveting to watch these two characters fight through all this again out of some unusual brand of dependency and routine, some fucked-up type of love that makes itself known in brutal ways.

The other riveting scene came when Hank showed Walt the Lab Notes that Gale had so dutifully and foolishly recorded. That scene ran about four minutes, shorter than the living room scene but infinitely more intense. It’s a testament to Walt’s charm and duplicity that we’re able to forget just how much hell he’s brought down on Hank, from the blue meth that drove Hank off the professional deep end to the death of Tuco and the vendetta carried out by his cousins. Hank even had Walt pinned down in the RV, not knowing it was Walt inside, before Walt escaped. Seeing them sit there and discuss the notes, with Walt desperately trying to play it cool and actually throwing Hank off his scent by describing the “W.W.” in Gale’s notes as a tribute to Walt Whitman, was thrilling in a nauseating way. Here they are: the man doing the dirt, and the man trying to clean it, and only one knows what’s really going on. Riveting, amazing work from Bryan Cranston and Dean Norris, as usual. Bucksley also played both scenes differently in terms of framing, frequently returning to a wide master shot in the living room scene with Walt and Skylar to underscore an emptiness in and around them, but keeping the camera tight on Walt and Hank in the bedroom to drive home the claustrophobia of the situation. Just some perfect TV from all involved.

Those moments probably best summarize the episode while also tying in with the series’ overall themes of fabricated identities and what it means to betray those closest to you for reasons you deem worthy, but they don’t even begin to capture every nuanced moment from a stellar hour. Jesse’s fall from grace got darker and deeper, and he’s so far past the point of caring that he didn’t blink when a dope fiend ripped him off for $78,000 or when Mike tried to bluff him into straightening out. Jesse seems determined to test Tyler Durden’s maxim: “It’s only after you’ve lost everything that you’re free to do anything.” It’s amazing to think back — four years for some viewers, only a year for the character’s development — and remember that Jesse used to be just some scared, stupid kid slinging dirty meth and trying to act as much as possible like what he thought tough street guys should be. Now, he’s a cook on a regional/national scale with a family that’d rather forget him, no friends to speak of, a dead girlfriend on his mind, and blood on his hands. He’s had to grow up so fast, and for all the wrong reasons.

The episode also did something only a very confident show could do well: it found a way to mix sorrow and humor without making one cancel out the other. Because let’s face it, Gale singing “Major Tom (Coming Home)” on a karaoke DVD is weird and sad and a perfect detail from one lonely man’s life, and in the context of Hank’s investigation it would at best be a pathetic moment. But to have Walt sit there and watch it and be slapped again with the realization that he killed this sweet, unfortunate man just to cover his own ass: that was sorrow and pain like no other, right in the middle of a perfectly absurd moment. A balance like that is tricky, like Heisenberg’s own blue crystal. It takes a real chemist to pull it off.

Scattered thoughts:

• Walt Jr. is alive! Also, still not that important. He’s got a lot in common with Walt from “Lost”: both grew up faster than their stories dictated they could, which resulted in less screen time in later seasons. Ah well. At least R.J. Mitte still gets screen credit and a paycheck.

• “Walter H. White, man of hidden talents.” Honestly, Dean Norris has done amazing things with Hank, taking him from a one-note hotshot to a moody, complicated man.

• As I’ve mentioned, I came to the show a few months ago, so this is the first season I’ve watched in weekly installments. As such, it’s the first time I’ve had to sit through the “Previously On” segments at the beginning of the episode, and as with most dramas, I find them both pointless and overly revealing. Pointless because I’d like to think that other viewers and I will remember enough of what’s happened to follow the episode, or that the writers will do their job with subtle reminders. Overly revealing because those snippets always hit on things that will be brought up or referenced or expanded upon in the following hour, robbing certain moments of potential surprise. I think next week I’ll give the DVR a bigger buffer and just fast-forward through them.

• Mike’s eyeroll at his severed ear: amazing. It was a perfect way to underscore just how much of a pro he is. Walt and Skylar are trying to build the perfect fable for their meth money, Jesse’s sliding into a drug-induced stupor, and Walt’s growing increasingly paranoid, but Mike? Mike’s the guy who does his job. Walt’s starting to become the other guy.

• Great closing moments with Jesse riding with Mike, not caring where they go. The drama of these situations is never whether a major character like Jesse will die, but rather how far things will go before they’re allowed to live or escape or change. And Jesse’s been through quite a bit. As the show is fond of reminding viewers, sometimes staying alive is worse than getting killed.

Daniel Carlson is the managing editor of Pajiba and a member of the Houston Film Critics Society and the Online Film Critics Society. He’s also a TV blogger for the Houston Press. You can visit his blog, Slowly Going Bald.









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Comments

The whole episode was brilliant, but the opening was great in its own right. Mike pinned down in the back of the truck getting sprayed with automatic weapon fire. He didn't flip out, didn't freak. Didn't even look scared. If anything, he looked annoyed - like "Oh great, now I gotta deal with this ****"

He just hunkered down and waited for the shooters to open the doors (who were those guys anyway?), then took them out. Cold, calculating and totally fearless.And the whole ear thing was priceless.

Posted by: OldRod at August 8, 2011 12:35 PM

Bucksley also played both scenes differently in terms of framing, frequently returning to a wide master shot in the living room scene with Walt and Skylar to underscore an emptiness in and around them, but keeping the camera tight on Walt and Hank in the bedroom to drive home the claustrophobia of the situation. Just some perfect TV from all involved.

Every single week seems to be a clinic on how to properly create tension and do so much understated, unspoken conveying of ideas and layers. Gilligan and company wring you out every week. How long can they keep these up?

Posted by: branded at August 8, 2011 1:20 PM

I can't add anything to Dan's well-written (as always) summary, so I will add my secret shame: I get far more enjoyment than I should from the episode title puns.

Posted by: Mrs. Julien at August 8, 2011 1:41 PM

Jesse seems determined to test Tyler Durden’s maxim

I wonder if the Fight Club connection was intentional because that's exactly what I thought of when we saw a bald Jesse shaving heads in his run down, packed house.

Posted by: Paultera at August 8, 2011 2:11 PM

A beautifully written summation, as usual. I felt that same queasiness in that unrelenting, close-up scene of Walt and Hank. Geez, what an exhausting balancing act Walt has to endure. A scattered thought from last week's episode which (I don't think) was touched upon: Hank's small smile of remembrance when pouring himself a cup of coffee borne of Gale's ingenuity. Only Gale and Walt could find the beauty and integrity in the mingling of chemicals.

And yeah, Mike is just the coolest cleaner out there.

Posted by: alwaysunnysomewhere at August 8, 2011 2:12 PM

Jaysus...Not *Hank's...But, Walt's small smile, etc....I get those names mixed up all the time: 4-letter, old man names always throw me. Crap on a spatula.

Posted by: alwaysunnysomewhere at August 8, 2011 2:18 PM

I love this show a whole hell of a lot, and I agree with everything this review highlights -- Breaking Bad continues to be a master class on how to write, act, direct, and even edit dramatic tv. But this week, I have to admit to being a little disappointed with the episode.

My problem with it was stems from something pointed out to me a week or two ago: this show is brave because its entire run is about making its protaganist utterly, irredeemable unlikeable. That's not something that most shows have had the courage to try, and it's something that has created some phenomenal television. Breaking Bad isn't always a fun show to watch (though it's probably fun to watch more than it should be), and I don't expect to never be upset or disappointed by the characters. But Walt this week was just one step too far for me; I hated him so much that it detracted from the episode.

I read Walt watching Gale's video very differently than Daniel did -- to me, it was clear that Walt was panicking at the thought of Hank working on this case and the idea that he might end up linked to it through Jesse. That impression was reinforced when Walt's next steps were to rifle through the notes/pump Hank for info, and then interrogate Jesse about whether he had left any evidence at the scene (with total, unforgiveable blindness to Jesse's obvious breakdown as Walt angrily pressed him to recount, in detail, how he killed a man for Walt). There was no indication of Walt having any remorse for what he had caused to happen, in contrast to the fantastic exploration of Jesse's guilt that we've seen this season. Walt, as always, is simply worried about Walt (and more specifically, about feeling like he is in control).

Over the three and a half seasons we've watched Walt go from mild mannered high school teacher to murderous drug dealer, the thing that I've enjoyed the most is the idea that any one of us, in the right circumstances, might follow the same path. Walt was presented as a regular guy who made a stupid but perhaps understandable decision because of his dire circumstances and then watched things snowball out of control. You can understand why he began cooking, how he got mixed up in the dealing side, why he killed Tuco, and how he went into business with Gus. You can even understand, to some extent, his decisions to kill Gus' henchmen in Half Measures and his frantic call to Jesse telling him that it was them or Gale. But for me to retain any empathy at all, to not devolve into having sheer revulsion for his character, I need to know that he has been affected by the things he has done -- that even if he would choose them again, he feels guilt or sadness or anything at all other than an overwhelming sense of superiority and desire to prove his manhood at any cost. We saw that in a variety of ways during the first three seasons, including some great stuff when Hank was first shot. But this season, I don't think there's been a single second during which Walt gave us those emotions.

Maybe that's realistic. Maybe no one could go down Walt's path, and do all that he's done, without losing the ability to care about things other than yourself. But the total loathing I have for Walt feels to me like the only reaction I've had to Breaking Bad that was not deliberately and surgically implanted into my brain by the people making the show. If Gus walked into their house with a gun and told Walt it was him or Skylar, there isn't a doubt in my mind that Walt would tell him to shoot his wife and would then find a way to blame her for having the choice forced on him. And I'm not sure the show ever intended that he become quite that evil.

Posted by: Artemis at August 8, 2011 2:21 PM

@Artemis - The revulsion may not be accidental. I remember Vince Gilligan saying during season 1 that he wanted to turn Mr Chips into Tony Montana.

Posted by: Fiona at August 8, 2011 3:52 PM

Well said Artemis. I find Walt (and I mess up the Hank/Walt names all the time too) completely unsympathetic, but such is the price of pride. It has made him selfish, petty, resentful and vindictive. I understand that Walt was a person fenced in by his life and his circumstances who was suddenly freed from all constraints by his impending death, but the ability of these people to constantly justify and re-justify their own actions is mind-boggling to me. And makes for compelling television.

Do you suppose that at some point Skylar will stop hiding behind planning the minutia long enough to really look at what she is doing and who she has become? I want to ask if a slide can really be that precipitous, but I suspect that asking the question shows more about my life experience than anything else. I see how she justifies her behaviour, and how they implied its possibility with her old boss, but I find it difficult to swallow sometimes. Pregnant average middle class woman to Tom Hagen wannabe in 6 months? Really?

I'm glad that they finally acknowledged that the only way Walt can get out alive is to disappear.

(I feel a modicum of sympathy for Jesse, but not much.)

Posted by: Mrs. Julien at August 8, 2011 4:49 PM

@ artemis " the fantastic exploration of Jesse's guilt that we've seen this season. "

This has been the best part of the season and the series- a character who we have only know as a drug dealer, but seems to struggle so much more with guilt and responsibility then the man who "has to do this for his family." Watching this episode where Walt was so unrepentent and defensive that he has made good choices the contrast of Jesse- who seems incapable of believing he made a good choice - was invaluable. Further, to show Jesse has learned the game (knowing Mike was bluffing) and trying to be numb to all the moral (and physical) consequences... it really keeps the show from getting too "Walking Tall" with Walter White, Badass.

Posted by: Hattie at August 8, 2011 5:11 PM

It's good to know I'm not the only person who doesn't like this "previously on..." business. I've been watching your show, I remember what happened, so don't insult my intelligence. And don't tell me they're for new viewers, either, new viewers should start at season 1 like normal people.

Posted by: Craigilicious at August 8, 2011 8:54 PM

I've got to stop watching "previously on" as well as the "next week on." Can't stop myself from the latter cuz the show's been so good and I want some clue as to what's upcoming. Artemis-Walt's juggling so much right now, no less than the possible end of his own life at Gus's hands, that he's got no empathy for anyone else. Therefore I don't see his actions this yr as someone trying "prove his manhood." It's more of a surivival instinct...although i'll agree that maybe Walt thinks he's worked too hard for the house of cards to come tumbling down.

Jesse is more of an unsympathetic character in my view. He was a total fuck-up at the beginning of the series and made shit decision after shit decision. Hence the rock bottom we see now. I'm wondering what's next for him. I don't think Saul's "disapperer" suggestion to Walt was extraneous. I'm wondering if Walt will let Jesse disappear in order to save him. Not many places the character can go from here. Jesse merely dying would be too obvious, and BB does not truck w/ the obvious.


I even find it hard to find sympathy for Gale. He knew he was brewing poison for people. Sweet and quirky though he was, he chose his path and paid dearly.

Posted by: stryker1121 at August 8, 2011 9:49 PM

I had no sympathy for Gale either stryker1121 for exactly the reason you stated.

Posted by: Mrs. Julien at August 8, 2011 10:41 PM

"Jesse is more of an unsympathetic character in my view. He was a total fuck-up at the beginning of the series and made shit decision after shit decision. Hence the rock bottom we see now."

Here's what I love about Pajiba - your analysis is reasoned and thorough, and yet I totally fucking disagree with you.

I think Jesse is, hands-down, the most sympathetic character on the show. And, yes, I include Marie and Hank in that. I thought the scene where he and that girl go up to his bed to....play video games was such a great way of reminding the viewer that Jesse is seriously just a kid compared to others on the show. Walt has his wife, his children, his stability - he chose to fuck it up. Jesse had a fleeting shot at the same (his immediate family seemed pretty upstanding), but there he is living in his childhood home turned meth den. It breaks my heart.

Also, he is the only character on the show who truly has remorse for or experiences firsthand what he's done. I think Walt would've blown Gale away without a second thought - no question. Jesse plainly relives that moment constantly. Jesse, an addict, doesn't have the luxury of extricating himself from the messy fallout of cooking. He experiences it every day - indeed, it's the only family he really knows. He has a fraction of the self-preservation instinct of his compatriots. And there's Walt's biological son - a total innocent in thrall of his "bad ass" father. It's such a great setup.

Am I alone in finding the Skylar scenes tedious? Her womanish (yes, I know that's sexist) attention to detail is getting on my last nerve. As Walt pointed out, he's purportedly in recovery from gambling, so cut the bullshit with spending hours playing blackjack. I think she focuses on minutiae that truly is minutiae and it's driving me nuts. I liked her much better as a tangential character.

Posted by: samanthat t at August 9, 2011 9:44 AM

I don't know, stryker1121 -- Walt is definitely juggling a lot, but that doesn't explain to me why he keeps up the fake bravado about his run in with Mike, or especially why he went after the car wash when Skylar goaded him with the (fake) insult about his manhood. The latter made his life more difficult, but he just couldn't let a slight like that go.

I find it interesting that you think Jesse is a less sympathetic character. He's absolutely made bad decisions, but it's also always felt like he had fewer options than Walt -- he became a drug addict when he was really young, and he's made real efforts to climb out of the business only to keep being dragged back (and most of the time, Walt is the one doing the dragging -- including by causing/letting Jesse's girlfriend die). Had Walt not come along, Jesse would have got picked up for cooking, done a few years in prison, and never been more than a bit-player. Now he's trapped by some seriously bad people, his friends are getting killed, and he was virtually forced to murder someone. Of the two, I feel like he's gotten the worse deal by far.

Posted by: Artemis at August 9, 2011 9:45 AM

"but that doesn't explain to me why he keeps up the fake bravado about his run in with Mike, or especially why he went after the car wash when Skylar goaded him with the (fake) insult about his manhood"

His reaction to this rankled me tremendously. Walt has hubris to spare, but he really never struck me as the type to take this kind of bait.

Posted by: samantha t at August 9, 2011 10:23 AM

I enjoyed the review. If you were interested in hearing an episode review podcast then please give mine a try http://www.thetvcritic.org/casts/Breaking_Bad_404_Bullet_Points.mp3

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Posted by: Robert Paulsen at August 12, 2011 10:08 AM

I think this is the episode that is turning the season towards how they promoted it - seems like everything is really getting going now and they're upping the ante on action...I'm interested to see what is gonna happen with Jesse for sure.

I love when Walter busted into Jesse's trashy little party and confronts him about how they plan to deal with the fallout from the murder of Gale (you can watch at http://vimeo.com/27637571 ). Great song, too ("Flyentology" by El-P) that is such an intense song for such an intense scene

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